Screenplay Practice

During our film classes, I created a screenplay for one short scene. Our teacher gave us a few scenarios that we had to pick from and I picked a scenario about revenge. This is the screenplay I created;







This was my final piece of my practice screenplay and I handed this to my teacher.


My teacher after reading this gave me some feedback;
-It needs some amending and spelling check.
-But, you have the beginning of a good idea, especially the surprising twist at the end.
-It needs to be a couple of scenes longer to show more emotional development.
-A nice creative idea though for this practice piece! good.


Making this screenplay was quite fun which made me think of making a screenplay rather than filming for a short film however, I am still not sure what I'm going to make yet but, when I come back from summer holiday I will definitely know what I'm going to create.

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